My reviews are always everywhere and pretty stupid.
"Why so serious?" (God I will never be able to read that line without grinning) - loved the description of the trap, too. It's so quick and the next thing you know Sven has a banana in his mouth. mdr
You know what? The "SUDDENLY: CUT TO MUSETTE" tactic for dodging the description of an attack or fight is a good one. I forsee it being used more often.
And you say you can't write Sven and barely Norma, but you nailed a key part of their relationship (the fact he's aware almost before she is). Um, I mean, that's what I think? It's always hard to tell with Sven.
ANYWAY LOVED IT. Although one has to wonder what the wedding would be like. All the Normas would probably be there and there would be no end to the madness.
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"Why so serious?" (God I will never be able to read that line without grinning) - loved the description of the trap, too. It's so quick and the next thing you know Sven has a banana in his mouth. mdr
You know what? The "SUDDENLY: CUT TO MUSETTE" tactic for dodging the description of an attack or fight is a good one. I forsee it being used more often.
And you say you can't write Sven and barely Norma, but you nailed a key part of their relationship (the fact he's aware almost before she is). Um, I mean, that's what I think? It's always hard to tell with Sven.
ANYWAY LOVED IT. Although one has to wonder what the wedding would be like. All the Normas would probably be there and there would be no end to the madness.