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everlastingsoul) wrote2008-09-16 09:08 am
everlastingsoul) wrote2008-09-16 09:08 am
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seta_suzume.
Post the first line from your 25 most recent fanfics and try to find a pattern.
...This includes everything vaguely drabble-like I've written, since I don't write many fanfics at all anymore.
1.) His laughter sounded so very wrong.
2.) One thousand, six hundred, and fifty-one.
3.) “The bed squeaks too much.”
4.) “What the hell is that thing?!”
5.) Finding her master was incredibly, incredibly difficult.
6.) The children of the sea were gone.
7. “Hey, buster, you owe me orange gels.”
8.) Why are you fighting, Walter?
9.) “Thank you, Fenimore.”
10.) “I hate treasure hunting.”
11.) Your name is…
12.) Her fingernails, like claws, had left bloody trails across his chest.
13.) Stop trying to get up again.
14.) "I told you there'd be treasure!"
15.) He awoke in a cold sweat, dilated eyes searching the area warily.
16.) Norma was a giggling mess.
17.) He had never seen so many Ferines before.
18.) She reached out to touch the gossamer wing, watching it flicker in and out of existence before remaining solid under her fingers.
19.) Her apprentice wasn't saying anything.
20.) His lungs burned.
21.) The pills made the pain go away.
22.) Red alert…
23.) Not many can say they dream the same dreams of their father and grandfather.
24.) "Albert!"
25.) His hair was a bright, unforgiving red.
So what can I get from this? I use concise introductory sentences -- sentences that will pull the reader in. Uh... This list supports my claim that, once I've started a new fandom, I don't (or rarely do) go back and write about the previous fandom.
...Most of the sentences can come across as slightly ominous, too.
...This includes everything vaguely drabble-like I've written, since I don't write many fanfics at all anymore.
1.) His laughter sounded so very wrong.
2.) One thousand, six hundred, and fifty-one.
3.) “The bed squeaks too much.”
4.) “What the hell is that thing?!”
5.) Finding her master was incredibly, incredibly difficult.
6.) The children of the sea were gone.
7. “Hey, buster, you owe me orange gels.”
8.) Why are you fighting, Walter?
9.) “Thank you, Fenimore.”
10.) “I hate treasure hunting.”
11.) Your name is…
12.) Her fingernails, like claws, had left bloody trails across his chest.
13.) Stop trying to get up again.
14.) "I told you there'd be treasure!"
15.) He awoke in a cold sweat, dilated eyes searching the area warily.
16.) Norma was a giggling mess.
17.) He had never seen so many Ferines before.
18.) She reached out to touch the gossamer wing, watching it flicker in and out of existence before remaining solid under her fingers.
19.) Her apprentice wasn't saying anything.
20.) His lungs burned.
21.) The pills made the pain go away.
22.) Red alert…
23.) Not many can say they dream the same dreams of their father and grandfather.
24.) "Albert!"
25.) His hair was a bright, unforgiving red.
So what can I get from this? I use concise introductory sentences -- sentences that will pull the reader in. Uh... This list supports my claim that, once I've started a new fandom, I don't (or rarely do) go back and write about the previous fandom.
...Most of the sentences can come across as slightly ominous, too.
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You could be not bored by Oh I dunnoo.... going to the copy machine room? ;o