everlastingsoul: (y halo thar)
Athena ([personal profile] everlastingsoul) wrote2008-09-05 05:20 pm

Tales of Dressing - A random conversation

Boooored...



“The bed squeaks too much.”

“…How would you know that? We rarely use it.”

“G-Girl and I like to jump on it!”

“…You’ve been in our bed with Grune?”

“Well, uh, yeah. We can’t have picnics all the time.”

“Why did you go showing Grune our bedroom?”

“Because she was following after mousy me.”

“…The mouse you was here, too?”

“Yup! So were two or three of the other mes. We had a lot of fun in bed. …Why are you looking at me like that, Wally?”

“S—sorry.”

“Wally, it’s okay to have fantasies once in awhile, you know.”

“No, it’s not! We’re dating!”

“We are?”

“Well, I know we made those confessions and everything, but…”

Breathe, Wally. It was just a bunch of mes and G-Girl.”

“What were you doing there, exactly?”

“Eating. G-Girl wanted to have a picnic, but we didn’t have anything but hotdogs and ice cream.”

“...You were eating hotdogs and ice cream on…”

“It was fun! Then one of the other mes started a pillow fight. We had to stop a few times when G-Girl popped out of her dre—Wally? Hey, Wally, no fair passing out until after I’m done with the story!”

[identity profile] noirrac.livejournal.com 2008-09-06 02:01 am (UTC)(link)
At first I was like, "LOL"

Then I was like, "LOL"

And then I was like, "...Oh~"

_^_ ....

[identity profile] yo-san.livejournal.com 2008-09-06 03:26 am (UTC)(link)
ffffffffffffff ahahaha this is epic. Poor Wally.

One small point: I got lost around the middle lines, since, counting back from the beginning, the line "“Breathe, Wally. It was just a bunch of mes and G-Girl.”" should be Wally's line, and it's not obvious which pair of lines in said by the same person.

[identity profile] daathic.livejournal.com 2008-09-06 07:59 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks for pointing that out. O_o Guess it's obvious I was piecing together the whole thing and totally didn't read it over, huh?

[identity profile] yo-san.livejournal.com 2008-09-06 02:15 pm (UTC)(link)
You're welcome--I thought you'd want to know. It's an easy mistake to make, since it's so clear in your mind exactly who's saying what.

[identity profile] griffins.livejournal.com 2008-09-06 04:54 am (UTC)(link)
...Oh Wally.

Norma started >:3ing at the "our bed" though.

And yeah, like Yosh said, you mixed up your line order in there somewhere...